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Monday, December 15, 2008

Reflection


My favorite poem I wrote was the Waltz Wave. I loved writing that poem because it describes a memorable time in my life. I like writing love poetry. It expresses how you feel more than any of the other poems. I enjoyed the freedom while writing poetry. It was sometimes hard to find the words to fit, but overall it was a fun thing to do. I learned alot about the vocabulary used in poetry. My webfolio describes my life as it has been and how it is now. It shows what I like and what I like to do.

Friday, December 12, 2008

Analysis of Poem

I See You Dancing, Father
By: Brendan Kennelly

No sooner downstairs after the night's rest
And in the the door
Than you started to dance a step
In the middle of the kitchen floor.

And as you danced
You whistled.
You made your own music
Always in tune with yourself.

Well, nearly always, anyway.
Your'e buried now
In Lislaughtin Abbey
And whenever I think of you

I go back beyound the old man
Mind and body broken
To find the unbroken man.
It is the moment before the dance begins,

Your lips are enjoying themselves
Whistling in the air.
Whatever happens cannot happen
In the time I have to spare
I see you dancing, father

When studying the poem, I came to the conclusion that the poem is literally about a child writing about their father, and how he used to dance. He is dead now; and they are reminising on the past. The title is relavent because they doesnt remember the old man he was before he died; they remember when their father danced in the kitchen. The author used personification, allusion, and imagery to create layers of meaning. One example is when he uses personication, by saying, your lips are enjoying themselves. The auther utilizes the following sound devices like onomatopoeia and rhyme. He uses onomatopoeia by saying whistling. The poem's form is free verse, with a scrict four line stanza until the last stanza. The speaker is a child talking about their father. The tone of the poem is sad at first then rememberance.

Thursday, December 11, 2008

Bingo Extra- Haiku

The hot island breeze
feels like soft cotton on you
sit back and relax

Art Response Poem


The sun breaks through the mountain,
and norishes the land like a fountain.

The trees stand strong and sturdy,
theres not a creature in the land in a hurry.

The river is calm and restless,
the birds are taking a rest.

The evening is calm,
its half past dawn,
and theres nothing wrong with that.

Borrowed Poem

I think that I shall never see
what has always been in front of me.

I looked over it;
trying all I could do to forget it.

But now I realize,
that was not very wise.

Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Synonym Poems

Fancy
Fantasy, dream, nice, notion
Fancy is delicate; it shows much emotion.

Old
Eldery, ancient, worn, senior
Old is patient, waiting to become a shining star.

Imitation Poem


You look at me

like a dog looks at a treat



A dog

eats a treat